An Introduction

An Introduction:

   Life was boring. Open up a dictionary and next to the word routine would be a picture of Brey Walker. Only thing that ever varied were the fantastical thoughts swirling in her head. Day dreams of having powers that lay dormant inside her, having a family curse that only she could break, being a descendant of some ancient royal line of faeries or vampires or werewolves.  For Brey, her bedroom was the entire world. She had read countless amounts of books. Romance, drama, fantasy, dystopian. Anything you could think of, she had probably thought of it before.  Her mind was full of music; her thoughts were nothing but jumbled words and images. It was a miracle that she could speak in full coherent sentences. So why was she important? Ask anyone in her tiny town of Springton, Virginia and they might respond: “Who is she?”

   But ask the people you don’t see. Not the people you hear or touch and just can’t see them, but the people that makes the hair on your neck stand on end, you know, when you get that feeling of being watched and you look through the crowd, struggling to put a face to the feeling, yet you never find them. Ask those people. And they'll tell you exactly how important she is. Well go on, ask.

   “Why was she so important?” you call out to the wind. You have that feeling, and just when you’re about to run the wind chuckles and answers you.

   “Because she saved the world.”

Reviews

[Sarah Wilson]

Love it! Makes you want to read more, love the flow. The only thing i would change is the line "Not the people you hear or touch and just can’t see them," with a little re arranging it will be more clear, and flow a little better. :) keep up the good work!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

So where is the darn chapters? I'm ready to read. Hit me! Lol. I hope to see the chapter.

[BookWorm]

lol I'm still navigating everything but I think you have to look under chapters to find it. I still don't know how everything works yet lol