Agroogles.

A make up word poem that is essentially open to interpretation. It was actually really fun to write and I encourage fellow poets to have a go.

Roses are facticle,

Violets are enip.

What is shamoozle

that septs from my lips?

I cannot belitastle,

nor shallop or contruce,

the trilouds of my mind

that i lepruce.

So donkle and ponder,

the words that you schroop.

For words are just argroogles,

and agroogles are just soup.

Reviews

[New Dawn]

We have toothbrush speak in our house. This is where instructions and endearments are mumbled around a toothbrush and mouthful of toothpaste - and oddly make perfect sense. This poem reminded of that. I loved it and have commited it to the 'trilouds of my mind':)

[Lana Bimbi]

I can definitely relate to toothbrush speak haha
Thank you

[asdarkeyesclose]

'So donkle and ponder,
the words that you schroop.'

the agroogles made me think of lentils, great fun even if my spell check can't cope! fantastic.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Nice poem. Very creative with a lot beneath the surface.

[Lana Bimbi]

Thank you muchly

[Extant]

My friend .serah. sent me this link, and I'm glad she did. This just made me smile... Of course, I could go deeply into the meaning of your saying "agroogles are just soup," but I'd rather not ruin the moment.

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

Quite a creative feat and very clever. An interesting side note is that many of the 'made up' words appear to be quite real and fit perfectly in your well written peace.

alisa ;-)

[Lana Bimbi]

Thankyou for your comment,
I honestly couldn't have been happier with how it turned out.
It's funny though how the words to make sense to some extent, and yet their meaning differs from one persons mind to another.

[Pawprints]

I love this!

[Ed Hart]

gratooious, crantabulous grattious...vericles, justimsus vericles

[Jon Roggie]

Checking to see if anyone is listening? It can be so fun just to go for random rhymes, play some words. Nice write!

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~ hahahaha... this is just unbelievably cute... you're a genius... :)

[Lana Bimbi]

I have my moments :)