I've got the Bullets

This is another poem i wrote about Rebel Without a cause. Its the scene where Plato is Shot

I've got the bullets

He doesnt know it

I wont show it

Who knew Id blow it

 

I've got the bullets

So dont pull it

Hold your fire

This command is Dire

 

I've got the bullets

I scream it to late

The trigger was pulled in rushing haste

You couldnt take a moment to wait

 

I've got the bullets

Dont you see?

Now youve set im free

But he didnt get to stay with me

 

I've got the bullets

You've sealed his fate

Now I'm filled with hate

One immensly disgusting trait

Reviews

[Lydia Blackwell]

this is a nice one. I can't remember the movie, I saw it a long time ago, but I dont think you need to have watched it to get the poem. It was good.

[Ima]

you draw the image so well in the mind of the reader ... even though the reason behind it confuses me ... i still think you did a great job!!

[SimplyDisastrous]

It had a few spelling errors but I really liked it otherwise. I really liked the rhyming scheme (:

[Chloe Christine]

Ive never heard of rebel without a cause..
But to me it sounds like you'd cature the scene well.
Very nice, (: as usual. (:

[KatiePie]

Hate is a very very bad trait, one that all of us should try our best not to harbor, though some times it is useful, like for getting inspiration to make beautiful works of art, such as this one ^_^
-Cathrine