Looking For The end (Fall From Grace) (One Last Show)

Came to mind just now

Im looking for the end a bend in the road because i dont want to face the cruelty anymore. I've been waiting for a long time to be pushed this far. I'm melting away into a PALE IMITATION of what i once was. Why did this happen to me? Because the world chose me as its TOY. the people wanted me for their own games.

 

 When i grew tired and became withdrawn they told me i was washed up done with. Now that im at this low point. it feels more like a HIGH BOILING POINT. But i wont let  them see me fall with a tearstreaked face and a short lived existence.

 

Something Inside is telling me that i can put on one last show before i hit that road. the road that has been taken countless times before by others who were once as glorious as me. They faded out without a shout and we never saw them again. But i wont ill make my shout the loudest you've ever heard, i wont go down without one last fight. I'll put on the greatest last stand yet and maybe you'll let me back into your good graces after my epic FALL FROM GRACE.

 

Thats how you publicized it i think. What a wonderful title. It emulates what you did to me. You thrust me into grace and you pulled me right back out. When you were done you tosssed me aside like nothing mattered so im going to do the same to you. I just want to tell you my few last words... SCREW YOU

(oops youll probably put that in your papers too)

Author's Note

Its kinda or rambling i know but hopefully you guys will understand :)

Reviews

[KatiePie]

I agree with shakespeare's daughter down there. The flow is a little rough but that's what makes this so brilliant, really it show that you aren't afraid to be honest and show the world (well the writerscafe community) that 'raw emotions' as she put it aren't something to be hidden, they're something to be embraced.
Great write ^-^
-Cathrine

[An owl on the moon]

A gritty honesty just floods with emotion from your words. I can relate to wanting to find the real you.. let loose the imitation.. Doing a little soul searching myself today. This is an amazing write!

[deeps]

SCREW YOU
(oops youll probably put that in your papers too)

WOW, this is powerful, I like this straight to the point.

[Undying Glory]

rambling? really, it isn't. some people though, might get intimidated and lost in the words, but that is just my opinion, considering you wrote this as a poem and not a story. anyway, i found this really nice work, and really interesting. great job

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Wonderfully written prose. A good write and you expressed your emotion very strongly!

Chloe

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Such honesty drips from this lovely prose.........love it!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the rambling. No-one wants to be told what their life is by strangers and people who are useless. I like the strength in this write. The ending is very good. I would not want to be famous. There is no respect for people private life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Lydia Blackwell]

beautiful-I loved it!

[Shakespeare's Daughter]

This is really good.... the formatting just adds to it, and i love the way you just let your words flow, to show raw emotions.

[SamBug]

This was really good. I understood perfectly!