Roses Are Red

Roses are red,

Violets are blue,

Sugar is sweet,

But the roses are wilted,

The violets are dead,

The sugar bowl is empty,

And my hands are stained red

Reviews

[Chapman]

Nice
Taking an idea that everyone knows, and twisting it upsidown!
Very clever

[...MysteryGirl...]

Great!
Turning something casual into something brilliant!
Great! Truely Great!

[..R.I.P..]

I loved this! A new twist to the whole roses are red thing. BRILLIANT! Keep writing.
~PJ

[Tori]

HA! Marvelous! It is like a whole twisted, truthful side to the classic poem. Fantastic!

[Livana Lowell]

Aw, cool, a new, twisted version of this poem. Been looking for something like this. Kind of gives me an idea. Pretty witty, I might say.