Why?

Why?

A Poem by Chula

Why do you have to believe what everyone else says ?

Why do I have to be so proud to not let things go?

Why do we have to figh like it is WW3?

Why can't we just be happy?

Why must we believe in the lies of what others say of us?

Why do we have to act like we only hate when secretly we miss the other?

Why can't we just go back to the way things were?

When boys were icky and we were BFFLAA's?

When we only fought over swings and toys not what girls say and who boys like?

Why can't I just have you back! the friend I thought I would always have...

Why can't we make up like we always used to do?

Why can't I get over myself long enough to talk things over with you?

Why must I have so much fear for caring for people inside my blood?

Why can't we just let this go?

 

~Chula

© 2013 Chula


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Why? Because life is full of unexpected and unexplained s****y situations and apparently people lol. Good write for doing it out of the blue. However i think that if you are going to break the pattern of starting each line with "why" (line9) I would end the paragraph there and start a new one or indent it somehow, otherwise it gives the impression that it was a mistake. Thats just my opinion though, if it feels right then keep it the way it is. Good job though :0

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chula

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much :) and I will keep that in mind next time lol



Reviews

Why? Because life is full of unexpected and unexplained s****y situations and apparently people lol. Good write for doing it out of the blue. However i think that if you are going to break the pattern of starting each line with "why" (line9) I would end the paragraph there and start a new one or indent it somehow, otherwise it gives the impression that it was a mistake. Thats just my opinion though, if it feels right then keep it the way it is. Good job though :0

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chula

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much :) and I will keep that in mind next time lol

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

216 Views
1 Review
Added on July 21, 2013
Last Updated on July 23, 2013

Author

Chula
Chula

Canada



About
Well I am a 17, almost 18, year old female. some of the musical artists that have really helped to develop who I am today are as follows: ~Motley Crue (huge one right there) ~Guns N Roses ~KISS ~.. more..

Writing
Yours Yours

A Poem by Chula


The Box The Box

A Poem by Chula


Being With You Being With You

A Poem by Chula