If I

If you could see my scars

Would you still call me beautiful?

Would you still call me your girl?

 

If you could see me cry

Would you try to catch every tear?

Would you hold me

just to tell me everything will be alright again?

 

If I let you see me fall apart

Would you try to put me back together again?

Or would you leave me to die like the rest of them?

 

If I try to hold on

Will you promise that our favorite memories won't be gone?

That one day together,

We can look back on the days where we were planning for forever?

 

~Chula

Reviews

[Anna]

Really great poem, sounds a lot like how i used to write. You're message is quite relevant to anyone in a difficult situation in life trying to date. Most people in this world are too shallow to stick around when times get tough.

[Chula]

Why thank you And I agree 100% with the fact tht the people are too shallow to stick around when times get tough... that is what happened with my friend once before

[Anna]

Its really sad when you hear stories like that. Makes me angry with what society is coming to.

[Chula]

I absolutely agree, I wish that people would just smarten up already. I mena, the things that seem important now, like getting the most girls/boys, will mean nothing in a few years and when the people finally realize it they are going to have hurt alot of people that cared about them.

[Anna]

So true. But what can you do, fight all of society? You can't. You can just be apart of this society, the one that is real, has meaning, and value. The society of outcasts, of nerds, of metalheads. The ones with knowledge, insight, and experience.

[Chula]

If that is the case, I pledge myself to that society! It sounds happier! lol

[Anna]

Thats what I did at your age lol. I started highschool at 14 years old, found a group of metalheads and became friends with them. That amazing group of people is got me through so much s**t. I started off listening to A day to remember, escape the fate, bullet for my valentine and before I knew it i was into everything. Its not evil, don't let anyone tell you that. Its poetry, and I learned that through writing poety. Every song that is "evil" or "bad" is just their expression of emotion from a point of view that you don't see. Just like every piece of dark poetry i have ever read.

[Chula]

My step-sister has acutally introduced me to millions upon millions of metal bands lol So I guess I have to thanks her for always being there for me when times felt like hell and a half lol

[Anna]

My older brother is the one that got me into metal. Just remember that metal in northamerica and metal in europe is extremely differently. i only listen to european metal haha And thats good that you have someone to talk to about s**t