Suicide

Suicide

A Poem by Chula

I am alone

These tears I cry are filled with anger and pain

I never get a break from the constant teasing

I try to reach out, no one listens

I try to get help, but get rejected

I see only one option

I take the gun from the safe

Load it

Put it to my temple

Breathe my very last breath

Say my silent good-byes

Close my eyes

BANG!

I see my life flashing so quickly before my eyes

But all too quicly I am reduced to darkness

I am alone once more

 

 

© 2013 Chula


Author's Note

Chula
I am not suicidal! hahaha
The words were dancing around in my mind and I thought that they sounded good together :P

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I didn't even notice the mistake XD thanks! lol and thank you so very much :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


I enjoyed this piece very much, it captures the emotions in such a little amount of words, god job, the only problem is fix "Thses tears" sorry if that's rude, but all in all I only have nice things to say about this, even though it's a dark topic to write about, very well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


definitely not the answer... certainly an issue needing exposure... love to you ... E.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Chula
Chula

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