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Just a little poem I wrote earlier this year/an interaction with a spider and its web on my balcony one afternoon.

A spider made his home

Cutting half way across my balcony.

Its tiny and reddish brown.

I've seen a few bugs already stuck to his web.

I could have destroyed it to bask in the sun,

But spiders scare me,

And his purpose seems greater than mine.

 

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[EnglishMajor55]

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[Adam Adams]

"But spiders scare me,
And his purpose seems greater than mine." Very deep thoughts.

So, finally.. you speak the heart in words. I read some of your earlier 2-writes.. can say that the ending of your writes's very beautiful ... as same as the starting full of suspense is. You captured real nice moments of your real life in realistic words, very well. Simplistically beautiful poetry!