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I did one scan of both versions and fixed some grammar and punctuation errors that especially bothered me. Otherwise, both versions are mainly unchanged from when I wrote them in 2013; thus, beware of remaining errors and general amateurishness.
Additionally, upon rereading after several years, I've realized that some scenes might be triggers. While both sisters, for different personality reasons, engage with their love interests with mixed emotions in a way could be seen as nonconsensual, at the original time of writing this was far from what my (naive) mind meant. Still, as a precaution, please be aware of this in the later chapters of any seemingly nonconsensual triggers.
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