Dreamers Never Fail

The surreal link between awake and sleep.

Dreamers never fail...

At least not in my dreams.

 They always come out winners in the end,

 and nothing can detour them from their goals.

 Dreamers never fail...

 so why am i still awake?

 Not a pill i can pop

 can save me from this fate.

 They say Dreamers don't live in Reality,

 but a Dream left unspoken

 is a Reality you can never create.

 Dreamers never fail...

 so how many times must i fall?

 If i fell asleep eternally,

 would Dreams my problems solve?

 Keep me from the real world,

 if pain is all i see.

 Take me to a place

 between Heaven and a Dream.

 Dreamers never fail...

 sooner or later we all sleep.

 Until that moment I'll live to fall asleep.

 Maybe then I'll learn to be me,

 and conquer all my fears in that PEFECT Dream.

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

I love how you used the word dream to get your thoughts projected to the reader. The last two lines in this poem are my favorite ones for it sums up the whole meaning in the poem. Dreamers never fail get line as well and the only time we fail is if we stop dreaming.

[The Midnight Pen]

Thank you Kristina, this was like the 3rd poem i ever wrote. It was during a time i was always wondering if reality was as good as everyone thought. I've always found fantasies to be an euphoric escape from the harshness of day to day life.

[The Midnight Pen]

Thank you guys for your reviews and support! greatly appreciated! If u have any ideas on a good topic, shoot them my way and I'll see what i come up with.

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I really like this poem, the imagery I get from this is of me being a superhero in my own dreams. Neat :)

[loowzerX]

I agree, this is good. you have a mistake at the end peRfect dream hehe :)

[Unloved_kitty]

I think this is a really good poem =]
Keep it up !
~x~