Going to Hell

Sitting in the dark feeling the cold crowl up your neck,

as you slowly fall asleep you can't help but notice the

feeling of being watched,

you have invited "it" in yourself,

the half hearted emptiness,

the painfull silence,

and the darkness filling the room,

"it" has come to take you,

take you to hell. 

 

Reviews

[LivingDeath]

ill meet you down there, im going to hell to

[Missing Part]

nothing it was just something i thought up on the spot

[Ron Reardon]

You do have a way with words. Makes me wonder what dark thing you let into your life.

[Missing Part]

ya not so good with spelling

[Chelsea.]

It seems here that somebody has done something dark. I like the way you used imagery and said ' sitting in the dark feeling the cold crowl up your neck ', thats very visual to me. But, did you mean to write 'crawl' ?