My Love

You are my great love story
The sweetest love letter I could have wished for
A poem that sings what's in my heart
You are a painted portrait masterpiece
A work of art that leaves me breathless
You outshine the first morning rays of the most golden sunrise to have risen
You pull me from the darkest places
You are my all

Author's Note

Any constructive tips and comments are welcomed

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

You open your bare naive heart to this very page, romantically. Your emotions're worthy enough to adore, how pleasantly you speak the heart. Very impressive. The choice of word's simple, but much effective that further makes your poetry worth-reading, of course. I find some kinda deep infatuated but lovable, faithful feelings toward someone you're bewitched with. You want love to be lived but want someone's heart to be lived in. That's all what your poetry's anthem says. Excellent work! I'd be looking forward to reading your stuffs!

[Christine]

Like your short sweet poem. It's filled with sunlight.

[Briana]

This could easily be expanded into a song. It's quite lyrical in nature, and it made me smile with its sincere expressions.

[Samuel Dickens]

Boy, oh boy--some guy is lucky. No one ever wrote such words of adoration about me.

[Relic]

I'd be awfully flattered if a girl wrote this to me. This is very nice and to the point.

[CK]

Thank you. Any tips or criticism?

[Relic]

No real critiques. I'd like to see some punctuation but I realize some poets don't like using it. I like the little spices of alliteration you've sprinkled in it.

[Relic]

Oh yeah, and learn as much as you can about poetry. That's what I'm doing.

[CK]

Well other than the punctuation I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Relic]

I did. :) I'll be reading more from you I'm sure.