Done

Done.

It's over.

Not wasting my time again.

Too close to the end.

Giving up.

No hope left.

Pretend.

That everything is good.

Say "I'm fine".

Lie.

Then top it off with a smile.

Try it.

Just for a while.

See how it feels.

It sucks.

It's not helping you.

It only is for everyone else's benefit.

Die.

End it all.

Because that's better.

Better than living through this pain.

Everyday.

Running as fast as possible.

The past catches up again.

Reminds you of the mistakes you made.

Failure.

That's what you are and you know it.

So own it.

Author's Note

Depressed again. Enjoy :)
Feedback is always much appreciated

Reviews

[Laminators Dubai]

well done!
even in depression you write such a master....its amazing!
i mean written well...
thanks for sharing this write...

[C.E.Grey]

Why thank you :)

[Nhes G.]

I really like reading emotional poems just how i like writing them,too. This one had pierced my heart..Nice one!

[C.E.Grey]

Thank you very much! :)

[Frieda P]

I don't think you had to mention you were depressed after that one! :) Don't know who this is intended for but they're in big trouble....it's definitely a cry for help. Concise in it's message, nicely written and direct.

[C.E.Grey]

Sadly enough it happens to be directed at myself. Thank you much :)

[Frieda P]

Ya know I thought that in the beginning but then the 'you' threw me....yvw

[C.E.Grey]

Hmmm. That is a little confusing. My writing is fairly scatter-brained. :)

[Frieda P]

That's ok, I have one I wrote about myself in the third person *rolls eyes at self* :)

[C.E.Grey]

Haha that's great, is it up because if it is and you tell me which one I would love to read it... (I have given up on keeping up with all of your writing, you just add so much!)

[Frieda P]

Hah sorry, I've got time off work and this is how I relax, believe it or not...

[Frieda P]

Oh, it's called Third Person by the way, not very original I know! :)