Blood Red

Staring at the wall

Nothing new at all

 

Phone shattered on the floor

The way he left it, walked out the door

 

No desire to turn back

And to tell the truth she can second that

 

Blood spills, staining the floor red

Releasing dreams left in her head

Author's Note

I have been really depressed lately, so my writing reflects that. Criticism is much appreciated :)

Reviews

[TheLastEclipse]

I really like this one! Simple rhyme scheme and very clever yet still wielding a very simplistic wording but this was meant for simplicity and bluntness. :) Congrats 95/100

[C.E.Grey]

Thank you much

[Jack Reaper]

simply powerful, dark and full of emotion. nicely done

[C.E.Grey]

Thank you very much, that is a greatly appreciated review from the master of dark himself :)

[Frieda P]

Wow, are you in my head? Very emotive...

[C.E.Grey]

No, we just think on the same wavelength. Thank you much

[Frieda P]

That seems problematic for both of us...keep writing to get the angst out, I find it cathartic, hope you do too.

[C.E.Grey]

Thank you for sending me to a dictionary :) Now that I know the meaning of cathartic my day feels more complete, and of course :D

[Frieda P]

Anytime ;)