Angels Crying

Just something I feel, when it's raining!

ANGEL'S CRYING

 

Why so much rain;

Why so much pain;

Could it be angels crying,

Because our world is dying?!

Author's Note

I know it's short and sweet; however, I think I said it all!

Yes, that's me at about age 12!! I was writing back then, too!!!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Remind me of a Ojibwa poem I have read. Hard to understand the ways of this world. The Angels must be crying for the misery and sadness of a world running toward death. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sarah]

short and sweet. it was lovely

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Really solt less rain cascades on the angels cheek....

[November Gold]

Short and SO POWERFUL. I believe that things are going on daily that cause the angels to cry over the state of it all :(

[Rene Velez]

short and meaningful...nice one...

[Moflo]

Hah I like this poem a lot! Its naive in the sense that it could be a poem read and cherished by children everywhere, almost like a nursery rhyme. Nicely written.

[Marie Harrison]

Cute poem and pic Christina.

[FJ Davis]

Has the sound of child-like melancholy, while artfully incorporating a profound, perceptive and unsettling truth.
A fine little creation, Christina.

[Sarah Amanda Fletterich..]

This world has its ups and downs but God intends everything to happen for a reason. This world is our test as it was for Adam and Eve now we are proving ourselves to God that no matter the consequence we can get through this world destructive issue. I think of the Angels as if they cry for the pain that we go through as Christians in our daily lives.

[Holly Nichole]

Short & sweet but very true as well.