So glad to have you back with us.. One often cannot move to the next level without becoming frustrated, angered, or sick of where they are now. May your words here find themselves soaring you to a deeper, more beautiful place like you've never seen before.
Oh! This is rather striking in rendition! And the way you left it dangling at the end is so effective! It is almost like what you did not write enhances the merit of the poem. And that is some achievement!
A truly intelligent write...
Life gets us like that sometimes...There is hope...Just change your routine...Get a camera and take pictures..This can open doors to new imagination...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sunflower
I know how this feels more times than I care to. I have a feeling this will be a reaaly good write when it's done. Take care until we meet next time. Love ya.
I can identify with this well and am very happy someone put it so shortly and bluntly into words. Looking forward to reading the rest when you're up to it. Hoping you feel back to 100% soon!
I am a former member of North Shore Writers' Guild in Willoughby OH. I have had numerous poems published and letters. I am, currently, working on a screen play that I hope will interest my cousin-in.. more..