I don't know what to say about this one; it just popped out of me! It makes me think of my friend, Bob; however, I don't know what was going on in my head, when it was written.
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The first time I read this, I thought that it would be perfect for a song due to the repeated "wish a dream" phrases. I also like the formatting of this one. The indentation makes me think of the repeating phrases as echoes of some sort. Great Poem.
The first time I read this, I thought that it would be perfect for a song due to the repeated "wish a dream" phrases. I also like the formatting of this one. The indentation makes me think of the repeating phrases as echoes of some sort. Great Poem.
Poem is beautiful. Flowed like music. I like the sweet and kind story in your words. We need good friends and family to give us purpose and great dreams. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote
I am a former member of North Shore Writers' Guild in Willoughby OH. I have had numerous poems published and letters. I am, currently, working on a screen play that I hope will interest my cousin-in.. more..