Dawn

Dawn

A Poem by Christian N. C.

Day breaks, the horizon brightens, slowly
With each passing minute, the Earth warms
I lie asleep in peace, Oh so lowly
The Sun awakens life, like passing storms.

Yesterday, I was a prisoner, of my mind
Today, Dawn dictates a new day
Yesterday, I was forced to only fly blind
Today, Dawn commands "There shall be no grey!"

Dawn says "Today you have a fresh start.
Yesterday your mind was silent, today listen to your heart."

© 2015 Christian N. C.


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Wow! I don't even know where to begin with this - this is great! I love how gently it starts out, very representative of a new day break altogether. Then you go into a stanza about the hope of a new day and again, the parallel there is great. A new dawn, a fresh start. I love how you gave Dawn such a powerful voice and I shouted "There shall be no grey!" in my head as I read that line. It's a very bright and hopeful poem, thanks for sharing!



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christian N. C.

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it so much. Its my favorite of any of my writings. I re.. read more



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Great work Christian. The first verse is very deep and passionate. Keep writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christian N. C.

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Wow! I don't even know where to begin with this - this is great! I love how gently it starts out, very representative of a new day break altogether. Then you go into a stanza about the hope of a new day and again, the parallel there is great. A new dawn, a fresh start. I love how you gave Dawn such a powerful voice and I shouted "There shall be no grey!" in my head as I read that line. It's a very bright and hopeful poem, thanks for sharing!



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christian N. C.

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it so much. Its my favorite of any of my writings. I re.. read more
I really love this, I can see what you're saying, we all need brighten up and come out of the dark along with the dawn, I think you expressed that need awesomely :]

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christian N. C.

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your feedback! :)
Lyric

9 Years Ago

Your so welcome :]

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Added on April 17, 2015
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Christian N. C.
Christian N. C.

Syracuse, NY



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College Student I feel as though I want to create something that has purpose to me. I've never really written anything unless it was a school assignment before. But I figure its as good a time as any.. more..

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