Imaginary Mind

A look at what happens when people do things without thinking. On impulse

Mind takes host to and fro
How host arrives there host does not know
Uncontrolled, mind imagines for host
Rushed in, an imprisoned ghost
Web untangles mind, host is now free
Host remembers and a man comes to be
Man is on a road toward the sun
Fire pulls man in, man turns to run
Mind tells man to continue on
Man tells mind no, the unattainable gone
Man takes mind to and fro

Reviews

[Michael X]

i enjoyed the messege here, the insightful natural to the meaning leaves the reader pondering the simplicity and strength of the form. and imagine what it means to act on impulse, perhaps out of automatic reason. you habve a great way with words, keep it up

[loowzerX]

I found this poem to be quite enjoyable. thanks :)

[Fran Marie]

This weaves in and out and reads like a riddle,
very interesting this piece; indeed
nicely done

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

Oh and congrats on your first book!!!

regards
vincent
www.esprit.aegauthorblogs.com

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

Very interesting read, the dialogue between the mind and humanity is intriguingly real! Brilllinat!

regards
vincent
www.esprit.aegauthorblogs.com

[Poetic Beauty]

We are always battling with our minds and feelings trying to decide what we want in life and this poem states just that. It can be quite confusing at times and this explains this story quite nicely almost confusing the reader. This is a great poem and the flow is nicely done.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Great poem. You made created an incredible journey of the mind.
I enjoyed the states of the psyche. Great work here. You really broke
through the glass ceiling into the 4th dimension. I loved the sense of
infinite space as I read. Your vision was on a grand scale.

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I liked the way you called yourself your imagination's host; terrific. I really, really, really enjoyed this poem!