Path

The Ocean hurls it's waves upon me
Leaving me no way of remembering
What once happened through the closed walls of long lost past
My heart is an ocean and the sea inside is alive with life
Life vastly adventurous reeling about the uncharted map of my untraveled path
Outside this sheltered life lies a world of opportunity
Opportunity holding truth for what I am to become
I follow the light that leads my path
Where it will take me I do not know but when it comes I will go

Reviews

[Rodney Ray Hatchell / U..]

The path you are on is Gods, pathway. No better path it's a every changing path of the inward man. God Bless You.

[Poetic Beauty]

this poem tells a tale of adventure within your own life and letting it flow naturally. I can picture the ocean scene in my mind.

[Fran Marie]

One must always follow his/her own path and seek the
enlightenment and learn in the journey..well donE!

[Poetic Beauty]

this poem is great for stating that you are going to follow your own path and the imagery is painted quite clearly but the flow is off.

[Tia Sanchez]

The ocean is a wonderous place; I love this.

My heart is an ocean and the sea inside is alive with life

Beautiful line!!

[J.Black]

Imagery is fantastic. Great work.

[Stacey Watts]

Very nicely epressed the imagery is simply fantastic. Excellent work.

[Jon]

This is a awsome write!
"Life vastly adventurous reeling about the uncharted map of my untraveled path"
Its true you never know what lies ahead for yah, you can only go with the flow and let the current carry you where ever it is your going. Awsome write:D

[Lydia]

This is beautifully portrayed. I often think the soul is very much like the sea, and I like the way you write about it. Just don't listen to the sirens ;P

[Onatah]

The "path" we must follow to God is definitely confused for an obvious one. It is the path less traveled. It is probably not so obvious as a path through the woods. It may not have a trail to follow, but rather you may be pushing through webs and brush. Keep faith!