Musicgirl

I know this musicgirl,
she plays my strings.
She makes my mind whirl
when her raspy voice sings.

When she hits the chords so fiery
my heartbeat goes Crescendo,
my reason gets all blurry
and my senses go Allegro.

Piano, Saxo or Guitar…
doesn't really make any difference.
Lucky instruments is what they are
in her hands baffling influence.

The pitch she plays
is so fantastic and her
heavenly Cello-curves
make me go frantic.

I know this musicgirl,
she plays my strings.
She makes my mind whirl
when her raspy voice sings.

Reviews

[Ruth]

What a girl by the sounds of her :) Beautifully worded...such people can strike a chord in many ways xx

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Superb piece of poetry, flow is great, ryhmes and tempo are perfect:)

[Dustin Reichmuth]

A very mature piece of writing, the details in the words really present nice images if you're a fan of anything musical. Really well written!