Unacceptable

Can anyone else detect my madness in this? =^_^=

I hear your cryings

Even after you have gone

I'm ever so sorry

But this was something

That had to be done

You see, you were...

Unacceptable.

Something I did not like.

So I erased you.

Oh please stop this worthless crying.

It's not like your the first to be lost

Thrown away

Taken out of this world

Where no one can see you.

Still more tears?

What an annoyance you are.

You know my mind is set

And that you are a past memory.

I can't redraw what I forget.

Every detail of you is now gone.

I don't remember, not at all.

Never shall you hang

In a museum.

No, because I have forgotten you.

Yes, my darling drawing.

No more tears do I hear.

You are now gone yes?

Yes?

Ah, yes your gone.

Reviews

[Praveeta]

A clever write. Enjoyed reading it.

[ron]

I thought it was a person you were breaking up with at first, then it became the drawing that was imperfect. Nicely done I like how yoou flipped it around to mean what it was.

[Hatchling]

Great job. I like this

[Sami Khalil]

I can't redraw what I forget.
Every detail of you is now gone.
I like that. Nice write.

[Lovingleigh]

I really liked this! Great job and thanks for the awesome review on mine (:

[Wolfwind]

Madness? What? I don't think so... I would have to say this is a work of poetic genius! I love the way it personafied the drawing and treated it like it were alive. Very nicely put together and crafted. Great Ink!

Aaron