Dark Sunshine

Dark Sunshine

A Poem by Crinkle°
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Misunderstanding
So many f*****g words
Bad actions 
I don't sleep
What you want you get
A communication too shaky
Endless list of...
For f**k sake
Mentholated cream
I love you so f*****g much
Convince me I can trust you
Never shown who you want
Get your s**t together

© 2010 Crinkle°


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that's telling it like it is...empowering read

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So much emotion in this. The turmoil is all over this piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've felt this~ totally relatable~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you capture the turmoil of a broken heart in angry detail .

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Crinkle°
Crinkle°

Paris, France



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