Attempt

Attempt

A Poem by Crinkle°
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That will have to be soft and undivided too
My heart more tender than the ripest apricot
Wants to be touched for sure for a minute or two
By the way you will try to seduce me, or not

© 2010 Crinkle°


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the imagery of the fruit and the gentle metaphors is delightful..

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. brilliant use of "or not" ... and a truly lovely piece of poetry ...


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beautiful


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Nice write.

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what a delectable offering~ the language swirls ar pure nectar~

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your poetic heartbeat in gentle tones ~

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 Added on November 18, 2010
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Crinkle°
Crinkle°

Paris, France



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