Shiver, Whisper

An embrace.

I want shivers of love

Not shivers of rage

Shivers of wellness

A hug and a kiss 

In a whisper

Can you satisfy me?...

Reviews

[...]

. this is beautiful ... i want peace of mind ... and a heart that can think ... :) ...

[Lilly]

Short and lovely. A beautiful, tender and gentle write

[.]

a short and concise poem..showing the emotions of tender soul..lovely

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a truly touching unfolding of a gorgeous little note of basic requests to anoint the fragile human heart with care~ beautiful~

[An owl on the moon]

What a gentle, tender request. Your words drift down in glimpses of soft shivers and those thoughts of sweet, whispered love. Beautiful longing...

[Jeff]

I want that too. All we can do is keep trying.

[Brad]

i want that too...

[Anicca]

Lovely! It bought a smile to my face... Sometimes the short and simple ones are the best, certainly applicable in this case! :)

[momo]

This poem satisfied me. Very nice!

[Boantlers]

I concur with this well worded small poem.