The Sinkhole

When darkness surround you.

I know you've got some pain to share
Like anybody else around
Circumstances are so unfair
But don't give up, don't cry
When the demons get you
You can no longer hide
(or run away)
Your pain will always be there around 

your wounds
Please, believe me when I say
You'll be fine

Reviews

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. i so hope the pain goes away ... for all those of us who are pained ... and we can breathe ... and not feel the weight of life ... but just breathe and be alive ... here's to happy moments in the future ...

[Michael X]

very sublte and grammatically expressed to clarity, gives the reader a feeling of staying focused and overcoming tragedy to the better good,
nice length, form and reader appeal, awsome job on this :)

[Jeff]

The darkness is very hard to escape from.

[Robin]

when i hear you will be fine ~ i think of the handle from a broken piece of china , it can be glued back on but never the same ~

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

eventually~yes~ the pain will lessen but never quite vanish completely~