Something Beautiful is Dying

Something Beautiful is Dying

A Poem by Crinkle°
"

Last breath.

"

I want to say this very softly
I apologize to you
For all the pain I didn't see
When you really needed me
I was trying my best
But I couldn't
I couldn't fight your devils

When I think it's the same moon
Which shines for you and for me
You now walk on the streets
Of some foreign city
You don't know where you go
You're a prisoner of yourself
Your life is a long night

How many people have you betrayed?
How many lies have you told me?
How many others behind my back
Even your eyes don't tell the truth
Now you go on your lonely life
You don't believe there is an ending
But something beautiful is dying



© 2010 Crinkle°


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. oh, this is so intensely beautiful, crinkle ... and so true ... as you know ... i know someone i could say this to ... and you say it with mesmerizing poetry ... your words are evidence of a brimming heart ... a giving heart ... am moved beyond measure ...

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one could say this to me...i hang my head...this was rich like bitter honey

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Un petit poème qui contient la vérité triste mais belle

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"I couldn't fight your devils" powerful words Crinkle , your heart shines wisely in this poem...



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your heart is beautiful in this~ because even through the pain you can still see the potential for beauty within the other~

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. oh, this is so intensely beautiful, crinkle ... and so true ... as you know ... i know someone i could say this to ... and you say it with mesmerizing poetry ... your words are evidence of a brimming heart ... a giving heart ... am moved beyond measure ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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oh wow. heartbreakingly beautiful

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Crinkle°
Crinkle°

Paris, France



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