The Fight

Such a noise inside!

The absolute silence of the night
Struggles in echo
The tumult of my thoughts

Le silence absolu de la nuit
Heurte en écho
Le tumulte de mes pensées

Reviews

[paul]

yes yes yes. quiet nights echoing down the universe
tumoltuous thoughts. always tumoltuous thoughts

oh and the title: perfect !

[Aven]

very nice contemplation.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

la douleur de ce silence rivette~vous exprimez tellement ici en quelques lignes~

[Robin]

a poem felt

[Brad]

this spoke so real to me i shuddered....

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. ah! ... beautiful ... i'm always astounded by how passionately and intensely you express through such few but immensely poetic words ... i can hear the pain drizzle ... and then pour ...