The Challenge

Distraction.

smell my hair

caress my skin

approach your lips

come closer

and I will slap you

like a f*****g cat

look at my eyes

how dark they are

they will say to you

how hurt I am

don't try to tame me

I wouldn't be your cat

Reviews

[paul]

the first half reminds me of the duality i too often find , when approaching love.
and so does the second half. how marvolously you express it here

[.]

fierce...no taming a wild woman! well penned. loved the metaphor

[paul]

wonderful little gem of a poem.

[Somewhere]

Fire in your soul...I'm sorry for your pain. Well done.

[Robin]

Crinkle, you are full of fire

[Jeff]

Lots of venom in this one.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

fierce!!!!~ I adore the cathartic venom seeping out to leave behind clarity of perception~ I love love love the BITE in this~