You don't

understand me

 

or

 

care

 

anymore

Author's Note

Good thing it was the shortest poem ever!

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

Simple but yet speaks volumes of human condition. Does anyone ever really know any one else. We to often forget we are all different in some many ways but yet so the same in even more. As we are able to relate and understand the pain another feels because we have too felt it at some point. This piece makes me think about that and gives me a deeper appreciation to know that another has felt a hurt that I have also known before.


Well Done!!!!!!

[Michael X]

Some of the best poems ever invented are some of the shortest poems,
and your words reflect the same quality that would capture such and effect,
the cause and certainty is presented with logical reasoning and
conviction, allowing the reader to see the deeper meaning, Nicely Done.

[FuMiko]

I love it. For being so short, it is beautifully strong, and it is packed with a lot of emotion.
Thanks for submitting!

[Tenten]

this screams so much for being short, speaks volumes.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

simple, powerful. wonderfully written nicely done.


Great Write
Thanks for submitting

[Rain]

Less is more. You packed alot of emotion in very few words. I liked it. Rain..

[AK]

Short... but powerful.

[justink :):)]

you are right it is short lol its good

[An Ordinary Woman]

I must have read this before we lost our Words last week. I would never forget this one. lol It's great!!