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a mystery

without a key

to unlock your inside

door to your mind

the wheels of time

keep turning

and I keep churning

 

out the same nonscensical bullshit

 

dripping from my tongue, my heart, my pen

 

lie awake for awhile &

 

remember me

Author's Note

Published in the October 2008 Forever Nocturne e-zine, Volume II. fullmoonpress.com

Reviews

[Y. Counts]

This poem is very near to my own attempts at unlocking my truest self...... funny that you pair a pic of a Buddha (is it Vajrasattva?) along with it. From my experience, this is really what life is for...... being active in our own evolution. That "nonsensical bullshit" is part of it, but taking the time to "remember me", as you say, seems to be the higher self tapping your shoulder?
Nonetheless, a great little noodle about your experience! Thanks!

[Prose-full]

"a mystery
without a key"-------very nice..very nice..

" **nonsensical** bullshit"..love it..

"dripping from my tongue, my heart, my pen"-------genius

great write! definitely a finalist..

[RareRed]

Short, sweet and to the point! Nice piece, they always remember later what they lost. Thanks for entering in the "Past the Heartache" contest!

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

beautiful sweet and short. well done my bardic friend

[Beauty]

Well, I like it! Simply put, but profound.

[justink :):)]

good memory lol

[Jenny Davis]

I like this...very outside the box, it leaves a lot for the reader to think about :)
Thanks for entering this in the Vent Radio contest!