working haiku

 

Sleeping peacefully

Not aware that I am here

Dreaming while awake

Reviews

[Michael X]

Capturing perfect form, to me this reads just as a limerick haiku should,
the depth is intriguing and the balancing contrast add feature to ponder,
christal, you have a great way of defining the essence in mind and heart.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading the scope of thought in subtle grasping

[Sparrow]

On it's own I adored this haiku but added to the hillarious picture I had to giggle a little. Daydreaming is a common pasttime for all writers I'm sure so great choice of topic.

Good luck in the True Talent contest, I'll be announcing winners shortly.

Sparrow

[Andromeda]

i like! know the feeling...

[An Ordinary Woman]

Daydreaming- unfortunately that was my favorite pastime at school. I enjoyed ... and smiled... :+)

[Brenda Sue]

This is too cute and the photo is so funny. Great job.

[Emily B]

Dreaming and living. I like the roundness of it all.

[justink :):)]

lol... the photo was funny

[Siobhan MacIntyre]

You've been spying on me at work!! LOL This is how I spend most of my life--at work, at home, at the supermarket.... ah yes. The curse of a writer is being trapped inside one's own imagination, and the only exits lead to new plot lines but never to the real world... Did I say curse? Actually sounds better than reality!

[mattavelli]

This is great.
That photo is funny. :)