My Brown Eyes

Through these eyes

velvet brown delight

I see wrong and right

and I cry

 

Through these eyes

is my minds life

that flows and flies

and gaze high

 

Through these eyes

I see my life

go on by

 

and I blink

a tear or two

 

of what I witness from you

from the windows

of my soul

 

Through these eyes

I really see you

more than you want me to.

 

 

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Beautiful Chrissy Bear!!!!! I loved this! Very creative and poetic!

"Through these eyes
is my minds life
that flows and flies
and gaze high"

Great stanza! I'm gonna push you into going further and longer though. But this was the perfect size and perfectly cute! I'm snapping my fingers in applause!.....