I'm Thinking

Of what I did

to deserve this

 

This is ridiculous

to think

that you loved me

only to be found

to be a fool

 

will I ever be good enough

to deserve what i want the most?

 

Or am I destined

to be alone

 

how can anyone love me

 

How is it that out of all the things in the world

the one thing

I want the most

doesn't exsist

 

why am i destined

to live and suffer like this

 

I've just been thinking

time is running

 

and I'm leaving

 

and when i do

I'll still be broken in two.

Reviews

[Eidolon Michael]

This is the second poem I've read by you and I must say that you are amazing.I could never be as great a poet as you,so please keep up the great work!
Great job!-Demon Lord Michael