You Loved Me Once

Hate boils

beneath the skin

 

red anger

hidden within

 

you point fingers

and blame me

 

i hate how you hate

you dont realize the pain

 

i can't love

your smile smug

 

you know you inflict

damage beyong repair

 

that spreads

pumps through my veins

 

your words are venom

injected small amounts

to get me to shut my mouth

 

yoo lived me once

when I was little

 

You hate me now

that i'm bigger

 

you never understood me

you only burned me

 

I have no confidence

no self-esteem

 

I know I'm worth nothing

 

but through my hate

for you

 

I still love you

striving to have you love me to

 

what a fool to love

where love is not present

 

and a heartbeat

is steel

 

your abuse

hard and cruel

 

teaches me no hope

or feeling

 

you loved me once

when I was little

 

you hate me now

for I'm bigger

 

 

Reviews

[Hisou_Tenshi]

That's a very sad poem and it's interesting how you broke the words up. It's not bad it's just interesting. Maybe I should try doing that with a poem. Do you mind?