Who am I?

The question echoes

throughout the mind

struggling to be found

 

Who am I?

does anyone know

because I sure don't

 

Who am I?

what do i have to show

is the evidence present.

 

Who am I?

will I ever find

who I am

inside.

 

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

Everyone asked that question from time to time. You do it with romancing the english language. I think this is your style your gift, writing short pieces that packs a punch. You are very creative. I enjoyed another poem.

[Taylor H]

i love this!, its the main question every body is asking them selves. and the sad part is, we do ahve the answer but we jsut dont see it yet

[LeeAnne]

The question "Who am I?" is one of those question that probably can never really be truly answered. Sure, we might think who we are but most of the time it's not the TRUE way. In my opinion, I honestly don't think that anyone knows "who they are." But yet, we spend most of our lives trying to find out.

Anyway, nice poem. Short & And Right To the Point. Perfect.

[le_alexander]

Assuming that this poem is about you, my best advice is (I hope you don't mind me sharing), "Do not hang on to what others perceive you as being...find your own meaning of you...a meaning that no longer begs the question, "Who am I?" We own our on perspectives and perceptions of ourselves, but sadly, we forget because our perspectives and perceptions sometimes become clouded due to what people say we ought to be. Because of that, forget what people think you ought to be by creating your own meaning of "Me". Once achieved, you will be able to answer, "Who Am I?" Great piece, thanks for sharing.

[Wildecat]

Most of us struggle to find out who we are, and eventually we do. Nice write.