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One day ill

Next, still

Breathe and dont kill

Give me a pill

To become numb.

 

 

Scream to float

Smile to gloat

A dream for hope

I need to know

But I'm not done.

 

I'll fade like smoke

But stay solid like stone

forever to roam

never to soar

always to zone

 

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

This is very "Coffeehouse"! I enjoyed it and it puzzles me at the same time. It's almost reversely interesting because I can read some poetry that I don't understand "internally", but I know where they're going and what point they're trying to make. Here, I understand every word, but I don't understand where you're going! I'm not sure I've read anything that's made me feel that way before. Good write