i'm sorry

my air is thick

i can't breathe

as time ticks

i can't see

fog fills my veins

i feel so far away

i'm watching myself from the outside

wandering to find

my missing piece

drops of ice fall

and i wonder why

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

Okay you are a wonderful poet. I do not have the gift that you have. I want to deliver fantastic poems with so few words as you do. I love these lines;

my missing piece
drops of ice fall
and i wonder why

Very Nice Very nice. Keep writing!