loves Strange Twist

i hate passion, but dream velvet at times

bleary dream and soft air

with a hate for war

honor bleary, but time uncommonly rare

life's crush of passion

in a dream made of air

the rare bleary coarse feeling

of loves strange twist

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

I was hooked from the first line! Extremely creative! I would loved for it to be longer though. You have a knack for creative adjective and an "in & out" flow to it. Dope! I plan to read more in the future.....