Dantana's meet pt.2

In a society where interracial love is forbidden. And now this law has been broke and not by a regular couple. Two young ladies by the name of Dani and Santana. Will their love prevail?

The seventeen year old dirty blonde Dani stood still after finishing the beautiful black haired Latina, Santana's makeup. Dani felt a million thoughts going through her head. She could not belive that Santana had touched her. She was not sure of what to do. Dani stood in shock staring into Santana's eyes. The silence lasted a few seconds.
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Santana shut her eyes for a moment while Dani gently yanked her arm away and gazed at the ceiling. Both of these young ladies felt confused of what they were feeling. Santana broke this ackward moment by speaking up and saying, "I'm sorry Dani"
"Sorry for what?"
"I didn't mean to come into your life and make you feel terrible about yourselve"
"When did I say that I felt terrible about myself?"
"Never, I just assumed."
"It's fine." She said, "Can I show you something?"
"Yes. Just quick. I really need to get back to the cleaning"

Dani led Santana through her mansion of a house to the backyard. They both than walked across a stone path that Mrs.L had made and she told Dani that nobody could ever walk to the end of it. It was forbidden. Acceptions were only made for Dani. Dani than stopped Santana as they approached what appeared to be a perfectly placed garden probably planted by Mrs.L.
"You wanted to show me your mothers garden?" Santana said confused.
"No. It's more than that." Dani paused and felt a tear coming down her face. Santana noticed Dani's eyes watering, "what's wrong? We could leave if you want"
Dani felt so comfortable to be with Santana. The fact that she asked Dani what she wanted to do ment a lot to her. Dani started a little testimony about her and Mrs.L, "it is fine. We can stay. Thanks for asking though. It means a lot. Really. See, the thing with this place is that it brings back memories of me and my mother. We used to come here when my father thought my mother was cooking or doing housework. I would tell my mother how my day was and she would do my makeup and than we always ended our day by dancing in the flowers and each day we would plant a new one. She told me that every time I would plant a new flower, it would be bigger and stronger than the last one and would show how much of a strong women I was becoming to be. But now." Dani stopped, "I'm sorry, you probably don't really care."
"Hey! Trust me. I care. You seem like such a soft and genuine person to be around and I'm here to listen to whatever you have to say. Now finish your story."
"Thanks Santana but it is nothing, really. "
"Okay than, and your welcome. Now we should probably head back.


FOUR HOURS LATER

Dani is in the kitchen eating her alone time Souper when she hears the door slam open. Dani looked up to find the doorway from outside of the kitchen leading inside with a tall slim man dressed in plaid along with a old greasy beard standing there. It was Mr.L, Dani's father.
"Hi father" Dani said quick.
"Evening." Mr.L replied while walking away. He than stopped behind Dani and said,"Where is your mother and has that nigro left our house yet?"
Santana than walked in the room looking fierce but she knew that she couldn't reply sarcasticly or else she would not get the pay she deserved, "yes, I'm still here sir. I was just about to leave."
Mr.L looked at Santana disgusted, " I was talking to my daughter!" He shouted. Dani jumped. The room went quiet. Mr.L walked over to Santana and placed 25 cents in the palm of her sweaty twenty four hour working hands.
"Now get out!" Mr.L shouted once again. Dani and Santana's eyes met and both felt fear. Santana walked out while fidgeting. Mr.L than left the room.
Once Mr.L was no longer in sight, Dani ran out to Santana and yanked her around.
"I hope to see you tomorrow" Dani said flirtatously with a lot of happy energy.
"You will. Don't worry" Santana replied kind of happy. She was still in shock from Mr.L.
A smile grew across Dani's face. She started to feel warm and cozy inside. Dani took Santana's hand. Their hearts started pumping. Santana stared Dani in the eye and leaned in. Dani didn't deni the offer. They both went for it. As Santana's rough big lips met Dani's silky smooth soft small lips, they felt ecstatic and no longer confused. The kiss lasted a few seconds. Santana pulled away, "goodbye" Santana said.
"Wait. I have something for you." Dani said as she pulled a twenty dollar bill out of her pocket.
"No. Dani keep your money"
"It's fine. Trust me. There is more where that came from." Dani giggled.
"Thank you." Santana said while she pecked Dani's cheek with her lips making her way to Dani's ear, "See your beautiful smile tomorrow, I hope?"
Dani laughed, "of course."
Santana than turned around making her way down the sidewalk. Dani watched Santana fade away into the trees covering her house.

Author's Note

The dialogue?
The character development?
What do you want to happen in part three?