Dantana's meet. Pt.1

In a society where interracial love is forbidden. And now this law has been broke and not by a regular couple. Two young ladies by the name of Dani and Santana. Will their love prevail?

It was the year of 1989 in California.

"Why do we need a maid, mom?" Asked Dani, the dirty blonde hair cockasian. She stood at medium height in a black dress painted over by pink flowers.
Dani's mother, a old wrinkly nasty thing stood tall and looked Dani in the eye stating, "we need a maid because your father and I are just getting to old to keep up with this place and we would never ask you to clean because we know that you are busy with whatever it is you like to do"
"Cosmetics"
"What?"
"Cosmetics, mom" Dani looked at her mother disgusted, as if she did not know what her own daughter enjoyed, "Ya know, makeup?"
"Oh, why of course my dear" her mother chuckled, "anyways, she will start tomorrow. I think she said over the telephone that her name was Santi- Santa- Santiago, I belive she said Santiago." Her mother, Mrs.L than walked away shaking her fake plastic glued together butt.
Dani huffed her breath and flipped her body around turning her way up the stairs to her room.

THE NEXT MORNING.

*DING. DING. DING.* the doorbell went off. Dani knew her mother was getting her, what Mrs.L liked to call it, beauty sleep and she did not want to disturb her. Dani, with no makeup and wrapped around by a pink robe made her way down the satires finding herself opening up the door to a thin Latino women dressed in a black and white gorgeous fitting maid outfit who looked about Dani's age. Dani stood in shock, she had never seen a Black, nor Latino person in sight befor.The Latino women presented herself, "hia, I'm Santana Lopez. Where do I start?"
Dani could not find the words to answer Santana. She was I'm shock that a beautifull Latino women was their and now it started to process through her brain that she might of been her maid. Dani flutterd her eyelashes and spoke gently, "I'm Dani, my mother should be down anytime" Dani shouted, "Mother!"


A FEW HOURS LATER

Dani is sitting in her room while Mrs.L is going on and on to Santana how to keep the house perfect and spotless. In the meanwhile, Dani's father is probably at work complaining about the coloured teenage girl touching his furniture.

Dani stood up off her bed and pictured Santana in her head. She pictured Santana repeating "hia" about one hundred times. She imagined Santana's natrually long Latino eyelashes fluttering against Dani's cheek. Dani just wanted, one time, a close friend as beautifull as Santana to hold her hand. Dani knew it was wrong, what was going through her mind. She was confused and knew that she was disobeying all those Sunday school events she had attended but somehow deep down, she did not care. She liked thinking about Santana. It made her feel warm and safe inside. She could think what ever she wanted and nobody would know.
As Dani looked out her window, she heard her mother ranting on and on while opening Dani's bedroom door. Their again, stood Santana, beautifull as ever. Dani was once again speechless. The room filled with silence as Dani and Santana's eyes met.
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Dani's mom than broke the silence by speaking, "we'll I'm off to the country club! Ill leave you two young ladies alone. Dani, if you don't mind, can you please show Santana how you would like your room to be cleaned. Bye." Mrs.L walked out hitting alongside Santana's shoulder.
"So, umm. How do you like your bed placed?" Santana asked Dani from across the room.
"It's already made" Dani replied quickly.
"Huh?"
"I already made it. I was not expecting anyone to make it for me" Dani said flirtatously.
"We'll, it's good" Santana said also very flirtatously while winking, "But I think I could make it better, my mom has been cleaning houses for years and has tought me everything she knows." Santana than made her way to Dani's bed while Dani stood by the window and watched Santana mix the colors and fabrics and pillow cases, sheets and blankets together.

"Umm.. Can you please keep the pink and yellow cases in the same coroner. Their colors harmonize." Dani said nervously to Santana.

"Wow. You have got a eye for fabrics, miss Dani. I would have never seen that blend."

"Thanks? I love fashion, makeup. Their practically my life."

"Well than, maybe one day I will get some advice from you." Santana said with a sharp smile.

"Actually I could do your makeup right now if you want? Find your color?"

"Well I would love to but your mother is paying me by the hour and I need to get your bed done now that I messed it up"

"No worrys, ill fix it. Now come sit!" Dani's voice said demandingly. Santana went and sat down in front of Dani's round diamond edged mirror on a seat that was so uncomfortable she could feel her butt getting pierced but she didn't say a word. Dani took out some eyeliner and began to come near Santana's face. Dani's blood was rushing, she was scared as hell. What if she messed up? Her life would be ruined she thought. Dani got a little closer, " just close your eyes for one second" she whispered as she plastered a thin amount of eyeliner on the rim of Santana's eyes that turned out to look elegant.
"So far so good" Santana said while looking in the mirror. Santana reached over and grabbed Dani's arm gently while rubbing with her thumb, "thank you. What's next?" Both their blood pressure raced high and they both stood still for a moment.

Author's Note

What do you think of the time setting?
The dialogue?
The character development?
What do you want to happen in part two?

Reviews

[BreannaAutumn]

I think the time era adds to how unaccepting society is to this type of story, which makes it more interesting. Dani being interested in cosmetics helps make the time setting more believable since women didn't get to have many privileges of anything else back then.
You did a great job making the dialogue believable, but I'd really like to know more about what the characters look like ;)
I love your descriptions of the interaction between the women. I'm sure part 2 will be very interesting to read.. Maybe her mom catches them? Thank you for sharing:)

[Christapp123]

Thank you. I should be posting a second ones soon :) this is my first ever so bare with me through my next few. They might get a little sloppy :p

[BreannaAutumn]

Oh no its really good believe me:] I stick to poetry because stories like yours are so much harder to write. Its very impressive:)

[Christapp123]

Thanks, I live novels and such ;)

[Christapp123]

Love** my bad

[BreannaAutumn]

Haha well more power to you!

[Christapp123]

Part 2 is out

[Tristan Bond]

I think you developed the setting, plot line, characters quite well. My first thought is seeing them kiss, but if you are to develop a relationship it should develop slowly allowing the sexual tension to build.

[Christapp123]

Thank you, and that was actually what I had in mind. Currently writing the second piece.

[Christapp123]

Part two is out