Fact or Fiction?

your deep journey was something i stole
a heartless fool playing the main role,
whats done is done whats lost is gone....
a scrougering crow hatching from this once beautiful dove
but lets not play the game of blame your presence on my sheets
bring the lies to the light

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems, what do you think?

Reviews

[Frank F. Atanacio]

very nicely done so much in so little words well expressed

[MajorJesusFreak]

For someone very new to poetry, this is very good very heart felt. I enjoyed it. Can't wait for more of your work.