I Still Love You.

Lyrics Edited

Those girls cried fake tears
while my were real.
Those girls said I love you
My I love you was real.
My kiss meant something
They kiss meant nothing.
When I hugged you I didn't want to let go
now It's over cant you see.

You said you loved me
Now that I moved on
to somebody else.

I still love you

though.
But how is this going to work out
If were so far part
but so close to heart.

I meant what I said
when I told  you I love you forever.

It's  forever

because when I say it It's just not just something I say

Reviews

[Pikachu]

This is says what I'm going through right now.

I love it. It is one of my favorites. :)

[Jordan's Back]

This is Sad, yet beautiful. This is a tearful write and Your pain goes unnoticed

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest words and emotion need to be cherished. I like the story and the kind desire in the poem. Real gifts of love are rare in a life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Steven Cash]

Deep and powerful!

92/100

[Paige Allison Willmont]

I really liked this there are a lot of grammatical errors.. go back and re read it, you'll find it. and I was thinking maybe you should add something at the end of the poem. It just sounds like a quick wrap up. and were left...ohhh..? Maybe you should think about that. Nice work

[Teenage Romeo]

Damn heart break

[Backlight Burner]

Very nice, though i think at the end of every relationship one person still loves the other, sad but yet sweet :-)

[Becky Clancy]

I thought that your poem was rather emotional and sweet at the same time (: I like it

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like the ending, nice write.
Possible corrections:
while mine
"while my were real"
their kiss
"They kiss meant nothing"
when I said
"when I told I loved you"
it
"it's was forever"
it It's just not something I say
"because when I say it It's just not just something I say"

[No name]

I really like this write, awesome !!!!