Told you so

Hope you like the song I wrote.

Yeah

Yeah
Yeah
i'm sick

Of people

playing with my heart and I got one more thing to say
So sick of love
I can run

You can go hide
I don't want to see your face when it cry's
Because 

I told you
you were going to get

hurt this time
you so 
damn dumb

Now who's laughing 
now
At
your
pain
 Just go away
I don't care anymore
No more love songs

No more tears in my eyes

So don't

come
running back
if
you are going cheat 

on

this
So sick of all your lies
Just
go home

and die

Ha ha
Just go home and

die

I'm sick of love songs

You were my

little white lie
for loving

you
Now this is 
goodbye...
Thanks 

because you made me stronger

Reviews

[No name]

:) I love it !!!! Great write.

[Spookers]

"I don't want to see your face when it cry's" it would just be 'cries' instead of 'cry's'
"you so
damn dumb" 'you are so...'
"Now who's laughing
now" do not repeat word like this. It ruins the flow. Get rid of one of the 'now'

[Backlight Burner]

This is really good, and i love the message, very weel written :)

[stars are far]

WONDERFUL...
I totally agree.. I adored this piece of writting =)

[AmandaN]

I like the flow of this poem, a little word repetition here and there, but no matter. Powerfully emotive, it certainly packs a punch! You tell 'em :-)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Funny yet weird how things can make you stronger like that, nice ending, nice song.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. The words are good music. I like the flow of desires with the strong ending. A wise person get up stronger after a disappointment in love. They learn to walk slow and easy into a new relationship. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote