Forever and a day.

Forever and a day.

A Poem by Chrissy
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Declaration to someone I love.

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                                    Forever and a day if that how long it takes.
                                                    I love you today.
 And I love you tomorrow.
I love you forever and a day.
For who you are and what you are forever and a day.
I love you for you and know other reason.
Because of you I can breathe because of you
 because I love you forever and day.
Your my everything your my life
 your the reason for my life.
Without you I be gone because I love you so much.
Hope you know how I feel because I want to let you know.
I love you forever and a day.


                                   Declaration to someone I love.

© 2019 Chrissy


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This was sweet. I liked it. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is Soooo Sweet!!!!



Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like all your writing that I've seen. A very thoughtful piece awesome =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is very nice
A sweet poem,
I enjoyed reading it
good job writing this

Posted 12 Years Ago


Its really fab sweetheart! seems you sit with a paper and a pen, think you want to write and thats it...your job is done. You r so spontaneous and can go on and on elaborate on just a single thought so sweetly and easily. It is an absolute amazing for somebody who is just 14. u have a real talent. Must work on it more attentively. Love u lots

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was so sweet..
I hope he loves you the same way :-D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awwww, this is really sweet. I'm happy for you and your special other. :) I love the color you used for this; it looks good with the photo and it matches the poem well.
In the first line, I would add "that is" or "that's"
And when you say "for know other reason" it should be "no" instead of "know"
When you say "Without you I be gone" I would put "Without you I would be gone" Or "Without you I'd be gone"
Also, every time you put "your" it should be "you're"

I hope that helps!! It's really cute. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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