Like A Cold Blue

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I took a shot at us came back with a broken heart.
I took a shot with love came back with tears in my eyes.
Now I can feel it when I'm walking by.
That it still kind of hurts inside.
And I can feel the pain inside.
Because all the times you lied.
And all the tears I'll cried cause I wanted you back.
And I

fought for you.
And I would of died for you.
But you left me here with a broken heart.
And a razor blade to my name.
You said you wouldn't leave me here alone.
So why did you walk away.
Was it all the nasty words I said when I was mad at you.
Or was are love fading like a cold blue.
Was it fading the fire in your eyes when you looked right into my.
Because now I don't think I can love again because you left me here with a broken heart.
And my soul is crushed into pieces.
Because you left me here on  the floor to bleed.
Your words cut me so deep.
I cant even breath.
It hurts to see
It hurts to see
And
it hurts to feel so I stay numb.
Because all the s**t you said it making  so I stay afraid of the thought loving someone else.
Like a cold blue.
I just want to feel what we had was it true I remember when it was just me and you.
Remember us baby because I do.
How could you leave so easy.
I thought we were true me and you.

Just another lie

like a cold blue.

Reviews

[Missy Moooooo]

This honestly is my life right now. I understand every part of this poem. Amazing job making my heart cringe for what I had and remembering it. Makes it fonder when you bring readers into your writings. I love it. Maybe you could show more of what you guys had together to make it such a big emotional thing. I love it though.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and sad poem for love. It is sad what we do in the name of love.
"And I
fought for you.
And I would of died for you.
But you left me here with a broken heart.
And a razor blade to my name."
The poem description was amazing. I could feel the sadness and hope fading away. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Rahul]

Was it all the nasty words I said when I was mad at you.
Or was are love fading like a cold blue.
nice lines and it's very painful write, i can't say anything about this write because you made me speechless and this whole poem deserve to get this 100/100:) that's it.