Soul Mates

Soul Mates

My love for you is a melody

If I lost my sight I still could see

As love is blind, you’re my symphony

Of love of life and good memories

Your smiles a Gift not only to me

But to the world for all to see

An eternal love that will never die

Like the sun, the moon a star lit sky

I know that in life times do get hard

The death of a loved one is a scar to the heart

I feeling of loss that will never depart

But her memory lives on in all of our hearts

Just know this my angel, I will always be here

To fix your heart to help you heal

To make you feel the joys again 

Of life and hope to ease your pain

The love we have will never fail 

Never die and never frail

Life is short, loves is a gift

The pasts the past, we should never wait

To say the things we know we feel inside

I’ll be here for you always till the end of time 

                                

I’ll always make you feel better inside

I’ll show you a love most will never find

To you my angel I promise blind 

I will always be here by your side

By Chris Atkinson

Reviews

[Rick r]

Overall a good poem. A couple of comments on the structure:
Should you try to cut the fourth stanza down to four lines like the rest of the poem? Seems somewhat dis-jointed with the two additional lines.
Third stanza, third line: Should "I feeling" be I'm feeling or A feeling?
The general rhyme scheme is good but the fifth stanza doesn't stick to the pattern, and in some stanzas the end rhymes don't follow the line pattern. If that is intentional as a technique, then maybe try to find a pattern within that. If not, then possibly try to make the rhyme pattern consistent throughout.
Again, a good poem with a good flow. Thanks for sharing.

[Chris Atkinson]

Thank you for the review and advice Rick

[Gurleen Saluja]

It has been rightly said " Love is that condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own." so justifies your words author.. Very well written..

[Chris Atkinson]

thank you for your rewiew Gurleen, much apriciated

[Gurleen Saluja]

You are welcome :)

[Brianna Brie]

Awl...you are making me want a friend like that. One that promises to always be there.

Just know this my angel, I will always be here
To fix your heart to help you heal
To make you feel the joys again
Of life and hope to ease your pain
The love we have will never fail
Never die and never frail

[Chris Atkinson]

thank you very much for your review Brianna. Its just my opinion, but for me when you love someone you should always be there for them no matter what and make them feel special and beautiful every day

[Muse]

Awe so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet! I browsed through your stuff. A gifted writer you are.

[Chris Atkinson]

Thank you very much, I realy apriciate your words

[Ambra Celeste]

Being with a soul mate is not like being in an average relationship, love does not die, the connection goes beyond physicality. An heartfelt poem.

[Chris Atkinson]

I totaly agree Ambra, its an eternal love and two conjoined souls. Thank you very much for your review

[Chris Atkinson]

Thanks very much for your kind words and review, its greatly apriciated.

[sonnie ibadah]

"Just know this my angel, I will always be here
To fix your heart to help you heal
To make you feel the joys again
Of life and hope to ease your pain....." they say that when someone is willing to go beyond all bounds to make you happy, that's when you know you're loved. You expressed that beautifully, nice write!