Tonight

Wasting away

total decay

life is shattered

dismantled the memories

one pill after another

nothing is left

deleted the past

suicide comes at last

no more worrying about the past

there is no future

nothing left for me here

tonight I will jump

good bye to this world

Reviews

[shade]

it tells the story meany know and wish they never herd, it is a good write and shows what it is like to think suicide

[Alice]

pretty good and flowing as well.. I've always liked the sad side of peotry, other then the part where you tried to rhyme past with past there isn't much critic i can give. hope you continue writing !