All eternity

Looking for some positive feedback. I usually write dark poetry but today was such a good day that I ended up writing this and I really would like to know what you guys think about it.

She is my darkness, she is my light

she is my queen, in the night

she is my princess, my loving princess

I'd do anything to keep her

I am her night sky, I am her sunlight

I am her king, in the night

I am her prince, her loving prince

We had a vision, dancing through the night

She is the stars that light the night sky

I am the sunshine that keeps her shining bright

She is the love of my life

I am the love of her life

Together forever we will never fail

Together forever we will never fall

We are two souls that come together

That form a supernova

We light the night sky

We shine so bright

She is my queen for all eternity

I am her king for all eternity